All Comments on 'Time Looped'

And Robert Heinlein's story "All You Zombies" explores the same idea. You did a convincing story. Great job. Thanks for sharing! 5*

He goes down on her and she asks him:

"......You... you... do this a lot in 2016?"

Before he explains that he traveled back in time.

You're right. I'll fix and resubmit.

Fry is a reference to the cartoon Futurama? Never watched it, not even a single episode. And while I'm a Heinlein fan, I've never read Zombies, either, or don't remember the storyline. I actually came up with this idea as a counterpoint to the Back To The Future series, where the timeline seems very easy for Marty McFly to change, and instead wanted to try a story where it was impossible for the character to threaten his own existence, because of his intimate involvement in his own creation.

Interesting! Hopefully another chapter to explain why it happened.

You developed a novel approach to time travel, especially with your treatment of DNA and how much constitutes incest. A second chapter carrying him further into the future to show who/when/how he is sent back in time would be appreciated.

Just one sexy sex scene that began in the bathroom and proceeded to the bedroom, which is a little bit chinchy for a Literotica / Erotica story, even a short one like this one. I would have fallen for sweet Gladys too (Hubba-Hubba, what a babe). Thank you for an intelligent, well written story, loved it!

Very good, if too short...

Ah, a classic time paradox! You told the story well, without any extra filler. Well done.