All Comments on 'Tiny Spaces with Mom'

wonderful as usual...

A very nice bit of fantasy

PERHAPS ONE MORE CHAPTER TO THIS STORY?? A CONTINUATION FROM ONCE THEY RETURN TO THEIR ROOM UNTIL SHE DOES HER MOVIE?

perhaps a follow on in the hotel room for the rest of the holiday, and then back home during the film shoots.

FIVE BIG STARS!!!

Excellent, when is the follow up

I thoroughly enjoyed the story and the premise but there were a few missing words in certain sentences which made it a little bit more difficult to read. I have not used another person as an editor and maybe that is a problem for those who have read my stories on here, but I can see where an editor could be very useful. Overall, I think the idea warrants the five stars I marked and I hope to see a continuation.

Please !!!!! Stories like this are the best, some times you make them sound real. Not just a story, mom and son are the best. Thanks for the read

I would love to see this in a 5 part series with maybe 3 to 4 pages each.

That would be nice.

I KNOW AS A MOTHER AND A SONS LOVE IS UNFORGETABLE 5 STARS FROM ME

Need another chapter after they return to the hotel freshly fucked.

Both know there is more & both want more

Really enjoyed it.

Was picturing Julia Roberts or Sandra Bullock as the mom.

Yes, very arousing and so much potential !n I hope when they get home, that she gets aggressive and so does Bradley and they screw each other long and hard; with a deep cumming inside his Mom ..... Cannot wait for another chapter or two. Who knows what her future movie role might be and how she'd have to prepare for it ........... Thanks.

I'd like to see more of this story.

To get the techniques perfected - so well written but not complete - MORE PLEASE!

From reading the title only I was expecting something along the lines outer space, but thoroughly enjoyed the story.

I love the format of your stories, would defiantly like to see a sequel or too.

I enjoyed your story. Thanks very much. Please continue. Let's have Bradley getting a job as an extra on the film and see what happens.

Not too strong not too horny.. Lovely and supple story to slowly stroke my cock..i just came sweetly

Your stories are consistently enjoyable. You mine a lot of the same ground, over and over, but you always have some new inventive twist or plot idea to get the characters pushed together in an erotic situation,and it draws the reader in and keeps him glued to the words. The pacing is just right, and I admire the way you use dialogue to propel the story forward. It's something I'm working on in my stories. Good job!

More believable than most mom and son stories.

comes of this couple, although sequels don't appear to be your thing.

I had to rub one out at work. Well-written dialogue - keep it up!

Well done, HeyAll. Nicely developed character in a very short form.

hope you'l consider a ch.2

I have been searching for "unsimulated sex in mainstream movies". That is where the actors actually engage in sex on camera, including showing erections, blow jobs, actual penetration, ejaculation.

This sounds like the type of on cam sex the mother will be involved in. So hot.

Soo very naughty!! I sure liked it's! Please keep writing, you're one of my favorite writers!!

A great quick read.

I must admit I was expecting another variation on mom on son's lap in an over loaded car. I'm glad I was wrong.

Thanks

You did it again, thank you for a great story.

How about another chapter!

Damm omg

Damn this was hot! But what happened back at their hotel? Need more please

Loved the story, will there be another chapter?

Oh the benefits of being one with nature 5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟

Awesome fuck. I have to take my gf to one of those hot springs. I'll have to check Google for a good exclusive place. But why end the story here. Would have loved to hear what they did later in the hotel. After all repeat rehersals make your acting perfect.