by OnAndOn_Anon
Excellent chapter, with progress on so many levels of the story, and good sex scenes on top of it all. You did such a good job with your last chapter, that I picked up the story without having to go back and reread the preceding chapter. Now that is smooth continuity.
Thanks for another great read.
As always, an absolute joy to read your work. Glad you're back at it!
Great to see you're back in action and in better, if sadly not good, health.
I like dthe story but a couple points of grammer would make it run a bit smother I think. The content was really good, I like the way your not overplaying the mech and his abilities like many would be tempted to. Just have him all out blast the enemy away with the super tech, leaving us hanging to see what else the mech and alex pul out of the bag.
Great work
JC
Love your work and abso-fucking-lutely delighted that you're back at it again! Please don't kill yourself writing for us literotica whores, but know we appreciate everything you produce. Be/stay well!!
Mel
Glad you’re back! When I saw the update I went back and reread the previous chapters to get refreshed :) I love the series so far and hope you update soon!
One of my favorite series by far. Hope to eventually see more.
Any chance you could add an update here or on your bio page? A sign of life would be rather nice.