by Heroesdead
There is a good story here, characters are three dimensional and not just sex,sex,sex.
However since I am not a fan of BDSM or domination, I am hesitant to continue with the second part.
Otherwise I liked the banter and nerdy bits, even the emotional parts were well written.
Imaginative, well written and almost believable. As near perfect as it is possible to get. Very well done!
@TheSecretBunny. I have some ideas that will hopefully add some new dynamics if I can pull it off.
@Anonymous. As far as kids being a possibility, yeah, I suppose. Though I'll likely never write anything involving pregnancy or anything like that. I'll probably address the possibility of kids soon.
Thanks for the nice comments, everyone!
I really liked the tailjob with the tailpussy and I hope to see more of that. Since she can shapeshift her tail, I'm excited to see what other forms she can shapeshift it into, maybe a penis-like tip for pegging that can "cum"? Even better if she can grow multiple tails from her tailbone for pseudo-tail-tentacle sex. Not enough western authors of erotica include a tailpussy in their stories. It's usually the Japanese who do it and the few western authors who do incorporate a tail that splits opens usually only use it to vore someone.
For some reason. I thought this had another chapter.... Sadly no. I hope it continues
Good story. Just a suggestion: Lucy being shapeshiter can shapeshift into several people like that waitress to spice up the things in bed. Since she and Mason both found her cute.
Come for the hot succubus sex, stay for the insane wish fulfillment of being told "You are a worthwhile human being."
Please continue this series :)
Excellent, on to part two, that's listed under the Author but not here. Five stars! PS, He and Lucy really should get even with his company and fuck the people running it that fucked him.
I love the originality. You took what, at least, on this site, is almost a timeworn concept, and branched off in an entirely new direction. I loved that!