All Comments on 'To Catch a Merchant Princess Ch. 02'

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story! Cant wait for more! Thanks!

Trials, schmials! Throw them back!!!!

I am enjoying the story, and I like this chapter. There is one part which I found unclear. Near the beginning, it seems to get muddy as to whether Alicia and Thakkor are inside, or outside, the hut; and when/how they changed locations. Other than that, a nice addition.

-- KK in Texas

this is a great addition. I cant wait till i get to read the next chapter. :) You dod very good with this one.

Fantastic, as always!

Just reading these chapters has me grinning like a the Cheshire Cat! Love it!

Loving it.

Want to go straight on to chapter 3, but I need to get some sleep.