All Comments on 'To Catch a Merchant Princess Ch. 04'

i am thrilled with the progression of your characters! I can't wait for the finale which I am sure will be on par with the rest of your writing! I love the strong characters you create and the plot that you give to your stories!!! Love it!!!

Take her, take her, damnit. I have to wait for another chapter!

Love the story but disappointed in the male character. Alicia seems like such an independent woman. Having a knight in shining armor doesn't suit that independence. The knight should have been more tarnished and shadowed. I wish they had more of an opposites attract relationship instead of this docile boy next door feel.

Just as I was thinking this one was running on tramlines, you shoot the narrative off in a new direction. Brilliant!