by MSTarot
Two broken people trying to fix each other, eh? I can see this story as a one-off, or as start of a series, trying to come to terms with each other's trauma by sexual healing. The doomsday prepper angle is one I haven't seen a lot of Literotica. Interesting.
I agree with Kahunabob…excellent premise and I would love to see these characters and their story further developed.
Good start, more please. he needs to fill her pussy with cum and make babies.
grin/grind. it's the simple things, but in the last few lines of a five page story? Somewhat tragic editing mistake.
I'm with everyone else. If votes and comments can get you to further the story, add my comment, and please enjoy 5 stars. It's all they let me give.
Dewey Cheatham
I have never had the pleasure of eating a pussy that tasted like vanilla malt mixed with burning sandalwood and peppery dark chocolate I'm afraid.... Anyway, I gave it a 5.
I got around halfway into the first page and it just seemed to depressing to continue.1/5
Really need some editing for format and spelling/ usage.
You do not need help on story or dialogue, though.
Five for you
On one hand, I'm tempted to give this 5 stars because it's well written and entertaining. On the other hand, it's borderline non-consent (she basically blackmails him into sex), so I don't feel it deserves 5 stars for that.
Bit different and uncomfortable at times but ultimately pretty hot and kinda sweet at times. Love to see some more chapters. 5 stars.
A lot of the things in this story I don’t like and them not having sex is high on the list
I love how much emotion you put into your stories. Definitely one of my top 5 from you!
Jack
Ooooo, lack of STD testing, very sketchy, very bad
A few formatting errors, you need a better editor
Other than that, sweet, dangerous, sexy, odd story of two very damaged people coming together
Nice read