by NRMathis
“One Day At a Time” wrecked me. A decision in 1984 took me in a direction that was similar,and there is some regret, as it took over 20 years to find that special person again, only to find him deceased. My heart has been broken ever since. Then, again, if I had gone that direction, I wouldn’t have the family I have now and two awesome sons. Thank you for this story. Thank you for all of your stories, they are soooo good. Life does go on.
The only criticism I have is for the first story. I think you should’ve let Vik and Al at least talk about Al moving to L.A. To me, it was the one thing that didn’t ring true. That conversation would’ve helped this story, in my opinion.
I still cried like a bitch reading this one, tho. :)
this two part series was heart-breaking, heart-warming, sad and happy. it was so good you were the second person i added to favourites (this doesnt happen often). th whole feeling of this second chapter left me feeling complete after, well, the first left me aching for more
Unfortunately this just didn't work for me, I obviously just liked Vik way too much. I really hated the way things ended between Vik and Alice. Michael genuinely seemed lovely I just didn't feel the connection, sorry! X
... to be unable to cry more.
I'm happy for Alice, but I hope he and Vik reunite. (Sorry, Michael.)
Thought for sure Alice was going to take a chance, follow his heart and Vik to LA. I would have followed him to the ends of the earth. Vik is one most romantics dream of but settle for someone else.
"I'm sorry you had to wait for me." Of all the dialogue in this story, this line stopped me in my tracks. I have yet to hear those words from the lover I have yet to meet...and when I do, my own tears will flow.
Wow.
You write so efficaciously...that finding love IS possible. Not the there's only one person for us-- but the reality that love IS is possible for more than one person.