All Comments on 'To Protect and Serve Ch. 05'

that was so funny i love the writing and the way the story just flows keep it coming

It's a pleasure to read (and proofread) your work. Glad of the shorter chapters too. (hehe, you gave in to my stubbornness) Keep 'em coming!

Reading your work is addictive. I love this storyline. I want more!

Can't wait for the rest. :)

This is proably the first BDSM story that I've read and enjoyed, they usually put me and my libido to sleep :)

But this story is well written (as usual) and a pleasure to read.

Thanks!

i really enjoy this story start to finish love it

thanks

OMG that was FANTASTIC!!!!!!! I totally busted up laughing when shamira decked sabastian!!!!! I can't wait till the next chapter!!!! This is getting GOOD. But PLEASE tell me that there's going to be more about Shamira and Sabastian!!!!!!!

Just finished the last chapter, and I must say I'm enjoying it more and more as the story goes on. I too am no big fan of spiders, so I can kind of see where Shamira is coming from *lol*

I anxiously await the next chapter :)

I hate repeating what everyone has already posted, but they used up all the good words :( AMAZING begins to describe it. thanks for writing it! ---and I did laugh out loud when she decked the spider guy!

Super freakin' fantabulous!

First the Werespider KO then the Rant to the woman she's sent to kill and that woman's simpithy and thanks...

Ok, I'm a bit odd, but I enjoy your stile.

BTW, my Gryphon wants to hump your alpaca... 8-O

Just a warning...

"She's already written her 'suicide note.' She even wrote it on pink paper with hearts and bunnies on it."

why does that sound like something one of my friends would do...

lol. and i totally agree with the werespider thing. i HATE spiders!

Usually thinking about death and fatal diseases and the such, there really isnt a happy thought associated with that. Whenever I read something in this series that midly suggests killing someone with a bit of comedy attatched to it, I have to look back and go "Did I just read this right?" I have a feeling like this series will drive me insane.

On another note, spectacular chapter and so far spectacular series.

I would have LOVED to end some of the conversations I had toady by killing the other person! Unfortunately thats not only illegal but also against societies 'morals'. and I'd feel really bad after too.

Aime the gun squeeze the trigger, see a spider jump a world record, head bang the man let him bleed, squeeze in the corner use the shadow, perfect sh your muscles lift the hummer and so on...... Just try to put shamira in a sentence ....... You're so, ok i just smile ........ EcilAlpaca thank you

Love the interaction from each of the characters, great writing. I hadn't even known this site when you were writing these, so I am really late to the party!!!

The story line & character development continually improve. The occasional w

Mis-used words & mis-spellings also continue to be distracting.