by kyrie1595
Very good description of the relationship between these two. Her needs and his in an erotic clash of dominance. She won this one, but he was the one who controlled her. So many people have no idea about who is the one in charge in a BDSM relationship. Very well done.
Terrific job capturing the dynamic of the dom/sub power exchange. Love the edging. Nice writing.
Wonderful touch. Soft and hard and teasing. One wonders if this was in fact
the writer? <GRIN>