All Comments on 'To Worship & Serve'

by kyrie1595

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Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 10 years ago
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Very good description of the relationship between these two. Her needs and his in an erotic clash of dominance. She won this one, but he was the one who controlled her. So many people have no idea about who is the one in charge in a BDSM relationship. Very well done.

visioneervisioneerover 10 years ago

Terrific job capturing the dynamic of the dom/sub power exchange. Love the edging. Nice writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good to see you're writing again!

What a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just horrible

Sorry I wasted my time.

writedoctorwritedoctorover 9 years ago
Awesome!

Wonderful touch. Soft and hard and teasing. One wonders if this was in fact

the writer? <GRIN>

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