All Comments on 'Toe Mistress'

I'm not sure how in the world you do it, but you keep writing stories about some VERY hot topics that end up BORING. There's no heat, no build-up and little-to-no believability to them. Clearly, poor writing is just your "style", so it is unfortunate that you will probably not improve.

You should have paid more attention in Composition class when you were younger.

It really could've been a superb story but you bored the hell out of me.