All Comments on 'Together Again Forever'

5 stars.

great erotic short story.

Very well written, but two homophones have crept in: damn should be dam and taught should be taut.

Never would have imagined incest could be so tender, and at 750 words even.

I like to jump in after a few comments just to say thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Each comment is special to me and over the years they are what inspires me to try again with another story. colin, that was the way to offer a very useful critique and I appreciate it...common courtesy and kindness indeed go a long way toward a better world.

This is just a great short hot story, incest or not. Five Stars!

Even if short, well constructed story between two sweet siblings.

I really like that you've basically removed the taboo out of this incest story, which I think many people feel is central to the category. It can definitely manage without, creating a story that seems more real and less like a horny fantasy.

Don't get me wrong. Horny fantasies are nice too but it's nice seeing a story where you don't overcome the taboo with animalistic desire but with simple love.

10 out of 10 my friend, beautifully written

Had you not commented on my story I would most likely not have found yours.

Delightful. If you are the person your words so beautifully lay bare ( Pun intended) I want you as my lover.

Can’t wait to read more. Right now!

My compliments to the writer YK. What a beautiful, beautiful story in so few words. My hat is off to you!

5* and should be 10.