All Comments on 'Tom Billionaire Ch. 02'

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Servo42 about 14 years ago

Back to the best

Ah, at last the, the billionaire club is cracking. It is great to see you writing again and at full steam. I cant wait for the continuation of this great story series.

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Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Where are we in this story?

One chapter we are ready to fly back to the USA with Thom and one of the Vs and the next we are back with Jonathan, Taylor and Ashlyn. Confusing, but still a 5 star rating.

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

bluedragonauthor is just whetting the reader's appetite

bluedragonauthor is just whetting the reader's appetite. It's a 5-star part of an 8-PART story. A change of pace (or locale) can and is effective.

LUSTYWHEELS about 13 years ago

Masterfully Done

At the beginning of this chapter it would be helpful to say 3 months before or 6 months whatever it is. Thanks I hope he gets Taylor back her and Cassandra is all he needs. I can't wait to see whats next. Thanks

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