All Comments on 'Tommy's Journey 02: Furniture Store'

OMFG!!! I originally was going to say that this was one really fucked up family after chapter #1, and it is, but it's now beginning to look like maybe the whole town might be a little off their nut. This is so ridiculous it's hilarious. It may take days before I can get the smile off of my face. This gets *****s just for the fun of reading this slapstick comedy. Thanks, MLF

Wow, it's actually kind of a shame that this is a gay incest story. Tommy and the saleswoman had really nice dynamics with each other and I'd love to see her get involved with humiliating him as his friend or girlfriend. That kind of chemistry is rare in the sex-first, characters-second world of online erotica, so it's a real shame that she's unlikely to appear so as to keep the focus on Tommy and Charlie. Feels like a missed opportunity when you showed you had the skills to write a really good relationship between Tommy and the saleswoman. But hey, you know that Spider-man meme. "But I don't want to cure cancer, I want to turn people into dinosaurs." As much as it feels like missed potential to me, you're writing what you love to write about, and I respect that.

Awesome story! I love the humiliation in the store!