All Comments on 'Tommy's Neighbourhood Ch. 03'

by TheTitLover

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mbaabdmbaabdover 11 years ago
Worth the wait

I think it was worth it to wait this long.

EndOfStoryEndOfStoryover 11 years ago
Worth the wait :)

Definitly worth the wait.

Ive sent you a message about your lack of editor, if that doesnt arrive, please feel free to send me a message here or on the forum :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I hope to see your writing more often. Very much enjoy your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
worth the wait

great story i can see a lot of possibablities for this story to continue i think it's time for him to fuck Mrs Hancock and also to fuck one of his lovers up the arse,also he could make Ms Stern his slut and spank her and maybe have a threesome with him and his

teacher.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
gr8

really good story, hope you continue soon

ScottWoodScottWoodover 11 years ago
Another triumph

Once again, all the cum is great. Also liked the dominance.

Was it wrong that I imagined porn star Lisa Ann playing Ms Stern?

Keep writing man!

TheTitLoverTheTitLoverover 11 years agoAuthor
Porn star

Of course not. She's a fine star, not the one I'd pictured, but whatever works.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
He had seen/read enought porn

To recognize a that Ms Stern was submissive, but not enough to recognize how much the garter snapping her nipple excited her??

Really??

breastman80breastman80about 10 years ago
best chapter so far IMO.

Wow! What a cumslut principal! Bravo Titlover. Nice to see Tommy coming out of his shell and exerting control. Hopefully it continues. I'll keep reading.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
I think I see a mutual admiration society forming

The TitLover

and BigTitMan80

May I request that you use a few more descriptors? I am sorry but fun bags, pillows, big meat flesh, and globes, are Not attractive ways to describe a woman's breasts. And, even if you keep repeating the same phrases over and over and over again it doesn't make it attractive.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Bbbbbuuuuulllllllls**t

This story has a good foundation, but seriously? ??????, every time the dude gets a nut, it's all over an area of a body instead of where it belongs!!!!! Get real dude. Popping a nut on some woman is a once in a while thing, instead of always doing it. That way. Especially for a virgin or a new piece.

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