by Evil Alpaca
of a love lost forever. Poignant and yet uplifting to all who have lost those close to us. Well done, EA.
EA,
I finished this about 5 minutes ago and my eyes are still not dry. What a wonderful, warm, loving, gut-wrenching story you have woven! Thank you so much. It rings so true on so, so many levels. I'm headed back to see what else you have written.
Thanks again,
Rebekka
This was,in my opinion , a beautifully written, heartwarming story. It happened to be about a lesbian relationship but that was kind of secondary, The story would have been just as beautiful if it were written about an heterosexual relationship. Just fine writing. the Ct. Yankee
...you have managed to make me cry. This was such a wonderful story. You are a very talented author. I love everything of yours that I have read so far and I expect that I will love everything new that you write.
A wonderful and heartfelt story. This one will stay with me for awhile.
'tis another tribute,I feel.
We'll always miss her.
Rest in peace.
not many stories make me cry, but this one did. you did a wonderful job with it. thanks for sharing with us :)
I've read this story before and I cried some, but then I read it again just now and was listening to 'Somebody by Depeche Mode' and oh my, was I crying. Great job. Keeep up the good work.
every single time that I read it I end up crying... very well written.
Im not telling you anything new, I cried reading this
oh my god i cant stop crying this was a great story thank u so much for wrighting this. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoox
The night I read this.. I just got finish crying over my loss. I miss her alot and she meant alot to me. This is a great story and even though it hurt so much to read it because I could relate to it more than u can think, I still read it. It brought even more tears to my eyes. Thank you so much for writing this.
I didn't understand why she was leaving ... they seemed so in love. And then I started to understand as they were making love. I'm still crying, but this was perfectly written. Absolutely beautiful love story. ~ L
I'd like to say I enjoyed this but it was kind of depressing, T.B.H. I was confused by the "leaving" remark, but then it hit me when she woke up and found her still in bed. Sorry man, but this was too depressing to be enjoyable, although the funereal scenes were touching.
This story needs a 'tearjerker' warning. I was expecting her to say " I've found out I don't have to leave!' etc, and was just so heartbroken. Amazing story
Goddamn fine writing.
Excuse me while I bend down and pick up my guts you spilled on the floor when you made my emotions rent my stomach open.
There.
Thank you.
story that most of us have experienced in one way shape or form. You did it so beautifully and made the characters so real. I enjoyed it immensely.
My wife of many years died some months ago and this lovely story brought back the tears. There's nothing more to be said.
Goddamn, this was poignant.... :'( the pain of losing a loved one.. <\3
My wife died two years ago and stories like this can still stir up my emotions. One of your earlier readers said that this story is too depressing. I totally disagree with him. Just because it's about love and death doesn't necessarily make it depressing. In fact, 'Tomorrow' is a wonderful affirmation of the power of true love to transcend all. Thanks, EA, for making this old man weep again---they were good tears.
Well, that was a kick! I never saw that coming. All the while, I was trying to work out why she would be leaving, all the possibilities, all but that one.
Fantastic. No possible reason not to give it five stars.
I’m sitting in hospice with my mother in-law
Thanks and keep up the good words
Wow not sure I have cried that much for a 2 page story before. This was beautiful.
Loosing a soulmate, a true one, then there is no going back back into a normal living ...... This is truly about loosing a big part of your heart and soul as well ...... EvilAlpaca, if you been through such misery then honestly my compassion and love for you
Oh my, this was incredible, tough to keep reading, impossible to stop.
Cried out now, whatever your circumstances, this flowed from the heart.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Never read anything so moving.
Wow this one brought the tears. Wendy would have been my mom to a tee. Great story
Don't know whether you're still somewhere out there, but if so, please know that you have me in tears every time I stumble upon your story. Just heart wrenchingly beautiful. Thx, Abi
BTW, some sign of life in your bio or something would things make easier, you know!