All Comments on 'Tomorrow'

by Evil Alpaca

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TE999TE999over 17 years ago
A tender depiction...

of a love lost forever. Poignant and yet uplifting to all who have lost those close to us. Well done, EA.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Blown away

EA,

I finished this about 5 minutes ago and my eyes are still not dry. What a wonderful, warm, loving, gut-wrenching story you have woven! Thank you so much. It rings so true on so, so many levels. I'm headed back to see what else you have written.

Thanks again,

Rebekka

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
beautiful story

This was,in my opinion , a beautifully written, heartwarming story. It happened to be about a lesbian relationship but that was kind of secondary, The story would have been just as beautiful if it were written about an heterosexual relationship. Just fine writing. the Ct. Yankee

laceyhall1204laceyhall1204over 17 years ago
Once again....

...you have managed to make me cry. This was such a wonderful story. You are a very talented author. I love everything of yours that I have read so far and I expect that I will love everything new that you write.

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerover 17 years ago
beautiful story

A wonderful and heartfelt story. This one will stay with me for awhile.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Missing her

'tis another tribute,I feel.

We'll always miss her.

Rest in peace.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
beautiful

not many stories make me cry, but this one did. you did a wonderful job with it. thanks for sharing with us :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I'm such a sap.

I've read this story before and I cried some, but then I read it again just now and was listening to 'Somebody by Depeche Mode' and oh my, was I crying. Great job. Keeep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
beautiful

every single time that I read it I end up crying... very well written.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
I have no words to describe what I feel right now

Im not telling you anything new, I cried reading this

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
im crying :(

oh my god i cant stop crying this was a great story thank u so much for wrighting this. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoox

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I miss mine too

The night I read this.. I just got finish crying over my loss. I miss her alot and she meant alot to me. This is a great story and even though it hurt so much to read it because I could relate to it more than u can think, I still read it. It brought even more tears to my eyes. Thank you so much for writing this.

xhelenxxhelenxalmost 13 years ago
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Well that was heartbreaking .... But amazing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow.....

I actually cried. Kudos to your brilliant story

elle_9549elle_9549about 12 years ago
Amazing

I didn't understand why she was leaving ... they seemed so in love. And then I started to understand as they were making love. I'm still crying, but this was perfectly written. Absolutely beautiful love story. ~ L

NobleKorhedronNobleKorhedronalmost 12 years ago
Ugh!

I'd like to say I enjoyed this but it was kind of depressing, T.B.H. I was confused by the "leaving" remark, but then it hit me when she woke up and found her still in bed. Sorry man, but this was too depressing to be enjoyable, although the funereal scenes were touching.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Crying

This story needs a 'tearjerker' warning. I was expecting her to say " I've found out I don't have to leave!' etc, and was just so heartbroken. Amazing story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
damn

the speech did it...

PerfectChancePerfectChanceover 10 years ago

Goddamn fine writing.

Excuse me while I bend down and pick up my guts you spilled on the floor when you made my emotions rent my stomach open.

There.

Thank you.

dazzleredd41dazzleredd41over 10 years ago
tears

wow im still crying wow i loved it

mab4664mab4664over 10 years ago
Heartwarming

story that most of us have experienced in one way shape or form. You did it so beautifully and made the characters so real. I enjoyed it immensely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I simply loved it <3 and m still crying lyk a baby!

Awesome work!! :*

xdenimxdenimabout 10 years ago
:(

I cried. That was unexpected.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This brought back the tears

My wife of many years died some months ago and this lovely story brought back the tears. There's nothing more to be said.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 9 years ago

A true lesson in living and dying

VyresOfTheArtVyresOfTheArtabout 9 years ago

Goddamn, this was poignant.... :'( the pain of losing a loved one.. <\3

MaonaighMaonaighover 8 years ago
Wonderful

My wife died two years ago and stories like this can still stir up my emotions. One of your earlier readers said that this story is too depressing. I totally disagree with him. Just because it's about love and death doesn't necessarily make it depressing. In fact, 'Tomorrow' is a wonderful affirmation of the power of true love to transcend all. Thanks, EA, for making this old man weep again---they were good tears.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
😢

Had me crying like a baby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ho...Lee...Fffff...

Well, that was a kick! I never saw that coming. All the while, I was trying to work out why she would be leaving, all the possibilities, all but that one.

Fantastic. No possible reason not to give it five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thank you

I’m sitting in hospice with my mother in-law

Thanks and keep up the good words

Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54about 3 years ago

Wow ... that was a kick in the heart. What a beautiful story.

Nerdyqueen94Nerdyqueen94over 2 years ago

Wow not sure I have cried that much for a 2 page story before. This was beautiful.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Loosing a soulmate, a true one, then there is no going back back into a normal living ...... This is truly about loosing a big part of your heart and soul as well ...... EvilAlpaca, if you been through such misery then honestly my compassion and love for you

tarkabukktarkabukkover 2 years ago

Oh my, this was incredible, tough to keep reading, impossible to stop.

Cried out now, whatever your circumstances, this flowed from the heart.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Never read anything so moving.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I have no words. 5 stars and a few tears

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can't write for the tears, wonderful but heart wrenching, thanks

Nicole2023Nicole2023over 1 year ago

Wow this one brought the tears. Wendy would have been my mom to a tee. Great story

abi70abi70about 1 year ago

Don't know whether you're still somewhere out there, but if so, please know that you have me in tears every time I stumble upon your story. Just heart wrenchingly beautiful. Thx, Abi

BTW, some sign of life in your bio or something would things make easier, you know!

Delta411Delta4116 months ago

I am a male but this Story made me crying….

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