All Comments on 'Tony 06: Falling In Love'

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Brittanyduran86Brittanyduran86almost 3 years ago

You were building the story greatly, what happened?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Excellent! Loved Tony & Karen together & a happy ending! Thanks! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Guess you just ran out of ideas for this story. That’s to bad l thought it had more potential. Thank you all the same.

Bay10Bay10almost 3 years ago

Loved the ending! So glad Tony & Karen ended up together! So happy they got a happy ending! Also, love the quote it is one of my favorite sayings. 5 stars

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearalmost 3 years ago

Loved the fun ending.

Made me laugh.

Never liked Mistress B so seeing her get her just deserts was cool too.

Really just want more Solstice... It's my favorite of yours, but not the only one I like.

Can't wait to see what you come up with next. If you want ideas or just a beta reader I'm more than willing to help. Thanks for Sharing!!!

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 3 years ago

Thanks for this.....glad it's over.

WeezyfWeezyfalmost 3 years ago

Nice journey and happy ending! Thanks for the story. Thr bits about misstress B left me confused. Why was she so adamant in having Karen live such a sheltered life, and abused her so much? Also why would she be against her living with Tony? She chose Tony after all. Also whyd she go and fuck the stinky shit and horrified at being his slave while she planned for her daughter to be his slave? Thats some questions i had reading this. But anyway the rest was awesome, glad they stayed monogamous but no threesomes with Karen +sis/mom/aunt. Maybe a bonus special?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I had the same question about being the slob guys slave. Mom was totally freaked out about it but would have allowed the daughter to be his slave! Didn’t make sense. Also, why would she want that life for her daughter?

SenorDomSenorDomalmost 3 years ago

LOVED the predictions!

Well done plot line and character development. Though I was hopeful there would be some experimentation with sensory deprivation, primal, or submission, the straight vanilla was a pleasant distraction, too.

Zeke503Zeke503over 2 years ago

I read this whole series today, well it's 1:30 in the norniing, so today and last night...

I really enjoyed the story and I am glad that you kept the main characters out of the BDSM scene, I just cannot like that stuff ! !

I have enjoyed just about all of your stories that I have seen here on this site and keep you on my list to watch for future postings...

THANK YOU very much for the time and effort that you have put into providing all of us such enjoyable reading ! ! !

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 2 years ago

(11/26/2021) What can I say; this chapter makes the series. Loved that they had a happily ever after ending. I loved this author's style of writing, his sense of humor. His crystal-gazing shows a very fertile imagination and would have made for several more chapters of enjoyable reading, chapters of more than two quick and easy pages. I believe for any author to become a fine (maybe great) writer, the author needs both talent and passion, and with passion comes discipline. This series shows great talent. It’d too bad that it’s being wasted, IMO.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved your crystal ball at the end! Nice little romance story too!

Lobosolo51Lobosolo51over 2 years ago

Too funny - love the predictions

Mojo648Mojo648over 2 years ago

Lol, funny about Klum, Kim Kardashian's bum and starwars and rocky,

I would've liked to have read the adventures of Tony and Karen in a storyline,

Glad there wasn't a few chapters where mistress b and Tony got into serious fucking and bdsm,

I think you did the right thing not travelling down that road,

Nice to have seen, sorry read about Tony working in the shop explaining things, (honestly to the customers).

BassNutt51BassNutt51about 2 years ago

Outstanding, I really enjoyed this story. Well written, only a few glitches, and it was hot. The lessons about safe sex were pointient and I feel necessary, even though most stores don't emphasize that enough. Thank you for writing, it's much appreciated and I think many of our 'members' enjoyed it also, lol 🤣

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This last one is a masterpiece. I especially liked the epilogue with all is speculation. I was hilarious. Thanks .

Easily a 5*

BJ

chiefhalchiefhalalmost 2 years ago

Nikki Haley? Really?

Roland58Roland58over 1 year ago

I would have like more but it was still good

oddballmarkoddballmarkover 1 year ago

Love the ending laughed at the Wi-Fi' dropping well like your writing so off to read some More

Mark

FseriesFseriesover 1 year ago

Nice except for the last part of the crystal bal predictions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Damn. Didn’t predict the btc price

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved your prognostications.

Six stars for the story.

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
Great story

And I think the ending was appropriate. I was ready for something light hearted at that point.

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