by CommanderBelpen
I loved this chapter even more than the first one. It's really hot. I wish the story follows this path.... The only thing that would ruin the story for me would be the introduction of other guys in his group. As I said, let's see how this evolves... The first step was good, the second step was even better, the next ones?
I really enjoyed your first chapter and was hoping for more of just the mother and son. I was disappointed with the second part of the story. Why complicate the story with other women. I am only going to give you one star because this is a incest story that is turning into something else and I don't like that kind of story. Now if the other woman might have been his sister or even brother I would have like the story better. I doubt I will read any more of this story.