All Comments on 'Topless Cleaning Services'

Thanks for the read.

Don't know about premise.

Coildn't get past the first sentence when you wrote BOARD when you meant BORED.

Get a proofreader.

One star.

"I was board one evening." That sounds like a very wooden existence. LOL. Unfortunately, you found ample opportunities to put even more mistakes into this story, despite it's brevity.

When there is an obvious mistake in the 3rd word, you know it is not worth reading.

Very enjoyable. There were some mistakes that were too noticeable, but other than that it was a very good read.