All Comments on 'Totus'

Make the impossible possible and break the unbreakable, huh? Nice.

I enjoyed the story, though I hope you've planned to write more. I have so many questions; is she going to fuck her dad or is she going to eat him because he's not female? Will her cousins come back so she can impregnate them? Are there more aliens that are going to come and find her?

I want answers, damnit!

I have every intention to write more, however I've got way too many projects going right now, with another one set to start in the near future. I'll see where my mind takes me, but I will say no, she does not fuck her father. Futa on Male is a no go for me.

I can tell that you put a lot of thought into your stories, which is something I personally enjoy. There's nothing I like more about a book, erotica or otherwise,than the unmistakable hints that an author worked hard to produce an extravagent story. That's also why I'm still upset about the passing of Redwall's mastermind: Brian Jacques.

really enjoyed this one what r u planing next

Whether you've read it or not, that's the story that's gonna continue next. Then I'm probably gonna work on another new story, though I'll also be working on a contest submission for Futanari Palace's annual story contest.

My god this is epic! Should make this into a movie!!!

I know that it has been forever since this was published, but I'd love a sequel!

I had trouble following the geometry, often. More detail to help the reader with that would be helpful. Fun idea. Looks like you intended it as a series but i didn't come to fruition.

Sad to see the story end here.