by Chrissie39
The story got me so hot -- this woman sounds like every man's fantasy come true!
I enjoyed the 'fun' and fantasy and it was a well written tale!
I was waiting for one of those 'gremlins' to come into play; flat batteries, out-of-range, erm, even having a piss!
I think; too contrived and unlikely!
It would be really nice to read a story written by you about a scenario that is a bit more plausible. There were certainly elements in this story that aroused.
Thanks for all the effort!
I absolutely loved this story. It has almost all of the elements I like...willing lady, sexual control, public setting..I think the only thing that was missing that I'd have liked to have in the story was me ! Well written,very casual style. Hot!
Another fab story from a fantastic writer, keep on writing you know i love your work.
That is so hot. I was fingering myself the entire time. It is just the type of story I love!