All Comments on 'Tracey & Lindsey'

Very sensuous and sexy, well-written.

And my thanks to that jerk Barry, for setting the events in motion.

Very erotic story. I especially liked the way you built up the intensity and sensuality throughout the story. Only draweback to me was that the story seemed to end too suddenly. I was definitely expecting more!

I saw your post on the AH "Lesbian Stories" thread. I haven't read any of your work before, but I'm definitely going to read your other stories.

I really enjoyed this story. Your depiction of the emotional and physical interaction between the girls was very good. The action was believable and moved at a nice pace.

You write very well, although there were a few spots with minor errors which you would have caught with a little more proofreading.

This is one of the rare Lit stories I'm planning to reread. Very good job!

This story has lots of really good, hot lesbian sex. I could really imagine the girls enjoying each other and getting off together. I would like to have seen a little more plot development and some more conversation between the girls, but that's just me - for those who prefer bare-minimum setup and lots of sex, this story is terrific.

Brit....that was white hot. Keep up the excellent work. Of course enjoy yourself.

I LOVED it!! Thank you for this very hot story!!! Please keep up the great work!!!!

All females should be so lucky as the character Tracey. A young woman giving up her virginity, to her lover in such a beautiful way.

Outstanding! This One's A Perfect "15 stars" Thank You.

lick and kiss. lynda_pussy_licker.

Tracy Lindsay like the former porn star. What are the odds.