All Comments on 'Trading'

by WFEATHER

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great Story

A very hot erotic story.A nice change of pace for crossdessing themed stories. I look forward to the next part.Thanks for read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
This one needs more work.

the plot is good but the development is lacking something. Perhaps someone else can suggest but it was bland to me.

TammiBadgerTammiBadgeralmost 16 years ago
Nice Beginning

The husband is submissive to his wife when needed. That is good. I hope they continue to have more adventures.

GagelessGagelessalmost 16 years ago
Please continue

well-written and a good intro to a larger series.

This couple needs to explore and I am with them every step of the way.

Woo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wonderful

I can see it in my minds eye, with my bride and I,

just as you so wonderfully described. Thank you.

She shall read this also. x warm smile x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
The problem?

If he's that much taller than her? They would have had to use a come along to get her swimsuit on him. To make this at all plausible you should have made them a little closer in size to one another. There's no way he gets wither the top or the bottom of her swimsuit on. No way in hell. And that ruined the story.

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