All Comments on 'Tragedy Brings Love and New Life'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Edit!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good Job

Story was a little quick, but you built it up nicely and your writing has a lot of potentail. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good

But way to short much more detail needed

Rancher46Rancher46almost 2 years ago

Great start to a wonderful love story but it stopped too soon. Needs a happily ever after and more detail to make it complete. 5/5

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