All Comments on 'Train Ride with Mom'

There is a line that separates pornograohy from eotica. It is a subtle, almost ethereal ,difference. Your story is high quality erotica. It titillates without being graphic.

Brsvo!

never had something for supernatural stories but this one is great and I love how the mom got more and more aroused

I've read many supernatural stories but this one is very intense. The taboo element makes it more interesting and exciting

Another fantastic story from one of my favorite authors here on Lit. Fun story!

Great and so hot. ..loved it and f

excellent tail er tale! you have spun a wonderful beginning, would love to learn more of their pasts and future!

I know that most of what is on here is fantasy or just a fuck story. This one was a few levels about that! The sex (well written) was part of the story and not "the story". No baseball bats for cocks or huge breasts. You describe those body parts but left the rest to our imagination. When I read the heading of how this was a supernatural experience. I had a preformed opinion of where this story was going to go. Well, I was wrong and I was glad that I was wrong. You went in a direction I never saw coming, no pun meant. Good job. Very good read.

Not a big fan of fantasy and sci-fi but was hot and well written. ***

Great story! loved it. However it would be interesting to see a story written by you with a more romantic style, love and lust.

Didn't expect to enjoy it as much as I did, have to admit that the whole supernatural thing had me worried. But it was for nought as it turned out to be a very interest and arousing story with just the right amount of mysticism to make it a worthy read.

Now this is a perfect example of erotica over porn. I loved it! Saw no problems or mistakes in your writing either. GOOD JOB!

I've always found HA's stories to be exciting (as well as very well written), but this one is in a class by itself. The pace is remarkable, slow and steady. As his mother describes the dream that possesses her, her son remembers that "like most young males, I've had incestuous fantasies before." The first part of that statement is so true. The very special, the unique love of a mother and her male child, whether either is conscious of it or not, always has an undercurrent of lust. The attraction of a son for the vagina he came out of and the fascination of a mom for what makes her boy a boy, his fat young penis and his heavy loaded balls. And the second part of the statement makes what follows seem totally natural. The son gets hard, harder than he's ever been before, and when he touch-tests his mother's vagina--just to make sure everything's okay, you understand--it's soppy wet. Might as well explore around a bit, so he finger-fucks her. Hmm, nice. The kid's so excited he's about to burst. No sense blowing his balls all over the place, time to get that penis up inside that vagina."My cock slid inside of my mother and it felt right. It was a perfect fit. It was the way it was meant to be." Of course it was. It's a boy's cock up inside his own mother's cunt, where it just fucking belongs. He'll be giving his mom periodic semen injections every full moon, together with great convulsive cums. Meanwhile, there'll be lots of cocksucking and cuntslurping, happy dirty fun between a loving mother and her loving son.

But there's only one problem... it left me wanting more!!!

Great job once again... i think this has some serious potential as a series

Yours truly would love to give the queen a taste of my 9 inch tool! Just say there is no boy that could change a tire with there tool. My queen would be in pain to walk so lots of pussy eating would take place.

Hope you write a part 2

Loved the story, the old witch has blessed this mother son with the ultimate gift, the removal of the incest taboo, now incest serves as a catalyst of lust as it should. Once the mother drops her guard and allows her son to mount her body and piston his young cock into her pussy they will rithe in pleasure and receive the ultimate orgasm the incest orgasm. Mommy has had her inhibitions washed away and will crave her son's loving embrace and constant sexual pursuit. As for the son he has entered paradise as he now has his loving mother to carcass his body as he fondles his mothers breasts, hips, and swirls his tounge against his mothers as he Pistons his hard unprotected cock into his sexy mothers fertile womb over and over until he fills her with his potent seed. This is the ultimate sexual fantasy of many men to have their mother satisfy their sexual needs and if conditions allow to make their mother a mother again. Thanks again for this great story that had me hard as a rock.

Sweet story. The only thing I missed is that there is no description of mother's looks. You know, color and style of hair, color of eyes, those small pieces. But that really doesn't matter that much. It's great. And squirting women are such a big turn-on.

It really isn't my thing. But you did a very good job putting the reader into the story. Well done.

Its jarring that you refer only to "Eastern Europe". Couldn't you just pick a country and city?

same as title

fantastic, a well told story. thank you

MrReaderMan, if we tell you it was Moldova, will that finally take care of your blue balls? HeyAll, for your next story i want to know the sons favourite video game and the mothers preferred recipe for apple pie. Thanks for the story, i managed to cum just fine.

Good tastefully done

wow... just super-erotic... i love these kinds of stories with plots.. thanks a lot for writing this wonderful piece

Most mother/son incest stories are based on fixation with each others bodies. The story of the gypsy lady was a welcome difference and made me curious of what lay ahead in the story.

You have come a long way since your early submissions . Thus is real first class escapist erotica some who have cum in mum report it as being the ultimate orgasm .

I will take your word for it

Fantastic plot, perfect length, and wonderfully erotic. Keep 'em coming!!!!

THIS WONDERFUL STORY WAS THE BEST THAT I HAVE EVER READ HERE...YOU HAVE ELEVATED SEX BETWEEN MOTHER AND SON TO A BEAUTIFUL AND LOVING PLACE THAT WILL REMAIN ALONE ONLY TO BE ADDED TO BY YOUR CREATIVE MIND...THANK YOU

5 star my friend. pure wonderful.

It was one of the most Erotic and Thankfully Happy Ending story. Would like to read further. Please update the chapter with some naughty stuff in Home.

I loved it!!!!!!!

Have you considered more elaboration in continuing this story line? I'm certain I am not the only one that would like to see more chapters of this. Maybe more visions or a return trip to her ancestor's homeland? Possibly a reading for the son that reveals something from his father's ancestry?

A good erotic story I have read after many days........

This is one of the best erotic stories I've ever read. The story itself, is intriguing, mesmerizing!

Very nicely told story, that was believable (yeah, why not?), and very hot. The sex scene could have been longer, but...

This was a very good erotic story.

This was a great story. It had none of the stiffness that some of your other stories have had,but they are still too short. They could stand to be a little longer.

First I discovered "Quarantined with Mom" today....then perusing your extensive list of writings.... 'Train Ride with Mom'. BRAVO! You have a new fan and I look forward to reading your stories, reading them all! OH!....how I wanted to be the son on that train ride...just to go for the MOM ride!

takes an angle at incest I haven't seen before.

isn't necessary, to have mother/son incest sex, though that may not be a bad idea, as long as there's a full moon and they keep it as THEIR secret, that is. More chapters please

It's an absolutely marvellous and breathtaking wonderful story. its keep it me all the time rock hard again and again.

You did it again, mom and son the only way to go. And when you go, you go all the way, another great story from............ THE MASTER STORY TELLER........THANK AGAIN

Great fantasy

This is a wonderful and somewhat unique story. I am just a little confused . The queen was never married and never had sex outside marriage except with her son. How did she get a son in the first place?

Oh my goodness - soooooo erotic. My cuck hubby and I read it together and now he wants to take my mother and I on an overnight sleeper journey. My mother has always had the hots for him and I know that I could get them together and then join them. More please Cathy XXXXX

So very nice, 🔥 hot. Please write more. 😊

So beautiful, this deserves to have a higher rating and a 2nd part!

OMG I can not wit to find out what happens at the next full moon, I hope for more

Hey All, I am one of the biggest fun of your m/s stories. I love the dilemma which you create between their minds and hearts. Also i love to increase their close intimacy with the third part situations. I just hope, you describe mom's physical property more. I don't say the big dick son or bombshell mom. I know you can describe natural and realistic. Thanks..

This mom-son incest story is a tour de force. I gave it an A+ [5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟)]!

If you are into incest taboo stories, you may really like this one.

HeyAll is an excellent erotica writer.

I'm copy pasting an earlier comment which I really liked.

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Schaka over 6 years ago

Excellent!

There is a line that separates pornography from erotica. It is a subtle, almost ethereal, difference. Your story is high quality erotica. It titillates without being graphic.

Bravo!

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HayAll is a brilliant erotica writer. This story gets a 5.0 = 100% = A+ (☆☆☆☆☆)!

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

This story is very very erotic.

That is one damned fine story, original and well written.

BRAVO! BRAVISSIMO!

Above expectations.

In my book this is one of the best mother-and-son stories on Literotica.

I gave you a 5.0 = 100% (♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎♥︎)!

Damn hot story. 5 stars. One point. It was mentioned at the beginning of her retelling of her dream to her son that the Queen was never married, and that as per tradition, she could not have sex outside marriage except on full moon nights. So how did she beget her son? Fucked some family member on a full moon night? You could have continued the story for a few more pages. Her incestuous liaison could have produced a few more children through her son. Or the same could have happened in the present day mother and son.

5.0 (100%, ☆☆☆☆☆+)!

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I also found myself becoming aroused. Who wouldn't? Mom or not, it was a tense and erotic situation for any young man. She looked beautiful under the moonlight while she softly touched her breasts. Sure, like most young males, I've had incestuous fantasies before, but they were just fantasies. Never reality.

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This mom - son sex story is NEXT LEVEL thanks to excellent writer's craft.

I am copy pasting this commdnt becausd I can relate to it.

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Schaka - over 8 years ago

Excellent!

There is a line that separates pornograohy from eotica. It is a subtle, almost ethereal ,difference. Your story is high quality erotica. It titillates without being graphic.

Bravo!

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