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All Comments on 'Train to a New Life'

by kinkynkazoo

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Loved it

I loved the story. It is so fimiliar. (lol) It was well done can't wait to read more. What's in the case?

CWCWalmost 20 years ago
so close

too rushed. The cliche' theme is not troublesome, the fact that it was rushed and short was bothersome.

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