by simplysizzling
You write submission so beautifully. Your stories have given me plenty of daydreams. Please, keep writing.
I really liked the first 8 chapters. The humiliation and abuse went farther each time. But the last chapter seems like you backed off. I'd like to see Maria get back into the story. I've noticed many writers lose their nerve after many great chapters as if they are afraid to take up another notch. Anyway, keep going! More public humiliation!
The submission is amazing. You tell a great story, this chapter is so erotic and Kyle has complete control over Rebecca. How will this be explained to John. Look forward to reading the outcome.
Keep up the good work,
Pumpkinbean
Great story,I love it and I hate it at the same time.And can't wait to see where it will go next.
Just one comment i hav a sneaky suspicion john has something to do with this training rebecca. CANT WAIT TO SEE IF IM RIGHT. Fact cant wait to see wat happens next FULL STOP.
WOW - this is fantastic - chapter 10 - I agree - John is involved - but a future chapter with a weekend with the German lady - Linda..:)
Also, John should take control of the maid!! :)
I totally loved this story and I am so horny right now - my master will get the reward!