All Comments on 'Training Rebecca Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great writing

Great - hard to better but I know you will

Lissa sLissa sover 16 years ago
Amazing.

You write submission so beautifully. Your stories have given me plenty of daydreams. Please, keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great story!

I really liked the first 8 chapters. The humiliation and abuse went farther each time. But the last chapter seems like you backed off. I'd like to see Maria get back into the story. I've noticed many writers lose their nerve after many great chapters as if they are afraid to take up another notch. Anyway, keep going! More public humiliation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A great read

The submission is amazing. You tell a great story, this chapter is so erotic and Kyle has complete control over Rebecca. How will this be explained to John. Look forward to reading the outcome.

Keep up the good work,

Pumpkinbean

mydestiny2003mydestiny2003over 16 years ago
Training Rebecca

Great story,I love it and I hate it at the same time.And can't wait to see where it will go next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
FANTASTIC!

Wonderful stuff,please,please,please keep the story going!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
More more more!!!!!

Love this so much,please keep going,please.......!

cutelilsubcutelilsubabout 16 years ago
Mmmm...

It was worth waiting for...thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Keep on with chapter 10

Just one comment i hav a sneaky suspicion john has something to do with this training rebecca. CANT WAIT TO SEE IF IM RIGHT. Fact cant wait to see wat happens next FULL STOP.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW - so HOT

WOW - this is fantastic - chapter 10 - I agree - John is involved - but a future chapter with a weekend with the German lady - Linda..:)

Also, John should take control of the maid!! :)

I totally loved this story and I am so horny right now - my master will get the reward!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Awesome story but what happened to chap 8

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What happened to chapter 8?

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