All Comments on 'Training Tim Ch. 01: Handjob Heaven'

Nice to see something original for a change instead of the teacher or next door neighbours hot mum.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I wish I was lucky enough to have 3 women helping me with my loads.

Very hot and entertaining story. Thanks for sharing.

Good premise

But there's no real step-by-step buildup.

Boom! Handjob!

No slow touching his cock. No teasing his cock.

The skin on his cock is sore/damaged. Why not some oil/lubrication to smooth the way?

No dialog telling him what she's going to do. No dialog about what she expects him to do while she's jerking him. No discussion about does he like this or that better. Faster? Slower?

Doesn't live up to it's potential.

Three stars.

Stopped after the reference to becoming like his Dad... Over a half-dozen mistakes in just That much means that more would be a waste of time for BOTH the writer & the reader!