All Comments on 'Transformations - Rose Ch. 01'

I’m looking forward to more! Thank you!

Ok then, Rose will be a perfect fit. Bring in her DDS contacts and she will be having a lot of new sluts for the church.

After she accepts the church I think they might rethink the whole too short to be a street whore thing and at least scan their minds first.

My hunches for this series are as follow

Constance/Rose will become a White Which willingly working as a DDS in private practice bring in more future followers.

Allison will become a street whore.

Edward will go into the professional case, or however you spell it.

Also if I was either a Mind Reader or Psych I would be getting laid more than what I do.

Oh, we have plans for Constance...

Chapter 2 is in the approval queue.

I have been following the series for a long time and have witnessed how the characters have matured in many ways, but I think there should be group /resistance to the Church of Morpheus who are trying to stop this act of debauchery. I think this would make the story more suspenseful and thrilling but then again this is my personal opinion. Thank you for writing, you guys are doing a great job and keep it up!

I can’t help but picture Edward Cullen from Twilight.

Was the name intentional?

Yes, there is growing dissension in the ranks. Does that lead to full on rebellion? Maybe... Future stories will also contain the government's attempts to stop the Church.

Only if we get to kill him slowly and painfully. But, then our story would turn into snuff, so probably not :D

hope you will pick up the new gym thread, though!

The whole concept behind Constance is incredibly hot and well written. She should employ the guys at Ray's, not the other way around. Good Lord.

Still think the length (or lack there-of) is frustrating when I have to wait for the next installment, but I will survive.

P.S. Love the direction where this is going

That was almost 5000 words, come on! If it makes you feel better, chapter 2 is almost 6400 words ;)

Constance does have a head for business...

90% of the time if a story is shorter than 4 lit pages I don't even consider it. The fact that you guys has enthralled me (wink wink) should make you proud!

Also I will stop complaining about the length from now, cause I can see it getting old reeeeally fast.

No, we want to hear your opinion on everything, even chapter length. You guys rock!

I know it has been awhile but I still find these stories and chapters to be a wild read with an outrageous world and spectacular characters. My personal thoughts are screw Lord of the Rings and let’s get this out there to the masses and popularized. The little packages characters sold at the toy stores and traded at all the Cons would make it more than worth the effort. It would be so much to own scaled down versions of most of these characters. Ahhhh but to dream.

Hi, Anonymous, Ann is constantly creating 3D models of the Transformations characters - at some point, we might just make these into printed sculptures. Check out our website link in our profile for Ann's digital art (it's been updated in the last month).