All Comments on 'Transformations - Witnesses Ch. 05'

I can't quite make my mind up about this series but I've read each chapter so far so that says something. I'm curious what happens next. This isn't really a mind control story, reluctance, non consent where Alex is corupting Gwen, pressing her buttons and letting her make the consious choice ti become his slut. That aspect I like. Jessica is just a bit of story fluff. I'm intetested in what Alex persuades Gwen to do next. I'd have her take David and see how submissive he'll be as their slave. Is he willing to submit without programming before Alex finally takes Gwens viginity properly & fully with her forsaking JW'ism and offering worship to Morpheus.

However you do it I'll read it as I want to know how it goes.

Thank you, richie78. We appreciate your comments. Mind control becomes more of an important aspect in later chapters, but for now it is more hinted at than observed. It becomes more of a plot point starting in the next chapter.