by wayneandanntriskelion
Just a constructive point, can you put in dividing lines or something to indicate the change of location. Sometimes it reads "jolty" as you move from location to location.
Still enjoying though and cant wait to see how Gwen will descend & what your going to do to David
I know, Richie78, and I apologize. I realized what had happened after I had put all four new chapters in the queue. I hate to resubmit, because it takes days to get then approved. All transitions from here on out will be marked with ***.
This is me just wondering well we see a long break again, or will we soon get to see Gwen get her cherry popped?