All Comments on 'Transformations - Witnesses Ch. 08'

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The_Crazy_OneThe_Crazy_Oneabout 6 years ago

Hopefully we get to see Gwen have MF sex soon

richie78richie78about 6 years ago
Dividers

Just a constructive point, can you put in dividing lines or something to indicate the change of location. Sometimes it reads "jolty" as you move from location to location.

Still enjoying though and cant wait to see how Gwen will descend & what your going to do to David

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionabout 6 years agoAuthor

I know, Richie78, and I apologize. I realized what had happened after I had put all four new chapters in the queue. I hate to resubmit, because it takes days to get then approved. All transitions from here on out will be marked with ***.

The_Crazy_OneThe_Crazy_Oneabout 6 years ago

This is me just wondering well we see a long break again, or will we soon get to see Gwen get her cherry popped?

wayneandanntriskelionwayneandanntriskelionabout 6 years agoAuthor

No long break, the scene is written.

The_Crazy_OneThe_Crazy_Oneabout 6 years ago

Looking forward to it

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