All Comments on 'Transition'

You've told a nice story, well laid out, but I don't think your quite done. This story cries out for continuation. Thank You. Ronnie W.

This is so unbelievably sweet it almost breaks my heart. Just lovely. Thanks.

if only every young woman could have a Tim for a teacher...

That was brilliant, I loved it. Well done and congratulations.

Hello! This was fun in the beginning but got very uncomfortable for me when Becks wants to know how her father fucks and he isn't averse to letting Liv answer that. Is it that Liv is just a vessel between them? I know it's fiction and all but just curious.

Very different

Wow, this is amazing! I am so NOT into old men/young girls, but your story made complete sense to me in and of itself, the benefits of Tim's maturity, the joy of discovery for Liv, that gentle bit of kink with the raincoat ... amazing. And offering the possibility of open frank talk about sex across generations. And you made it very sexy in a downbeat kind of way. Specially the coffee while still connected. Muscles rippling.