All Comments on 'Trapped'

i loved the way you conveyed the story as well as the grammar and vocab

Fantastic work, as usual!

Fucking great fucking, too!

Yay, cool! Keep it up, man!

No ejection seats on any plane till late forties when Brits invent them ;-)

I read this awhile ago but don't think I took time to comment. With the exception of the historical accuracy regarding the ejection seat, I'm consistently amazed by the research and quality of your writing. The Japanese treated anyone they conquered like slaves and tend to think non-Japanese are racially inferior or less than human. Hence, I can well-imagine how Japanese men would have enjoyed topping the enemy. I've lived in Japan and in some of the other places you've written about. Hope to see more...soon!

As I've said before, you really are a master of GM short stories.

wonder if he ended up being one of those Americans who stayed hidden for several years, not knowing if the war was over. And if he came to like what he did to survive.

Thanks to the previous commentator for bringing this to my attention, great story which easily evoked the right atmosphere of the time and place and fuelled my imagination.

What a situation ! Exciting story to read, but I wonder did you ever get to enjoy being fucked by the leader and then so many other men ? and, did you fuck any of them ? Would enjoy reading more about this situation..........