All Comments on 'Trapped in the Darkness'

Nothing constructive to say but I liked this a lot.

A timely story that I would love to see a chapter 02 followup with his date.

Got to know the rest of the story!

I just found this gem. Made we realize in some way what the survivors of 911 must have gone through. Well written with a lot of insight into a person mind. Thank you for your hard work.

Woodmanone

Loved it,hope there will be a part 2

Makes me think of the Murrah bombing in Oklahoma City. Very vivid. Heartbreaking and sad. Well done!

Where's the rest of the story? It's a really good intro, but does he have any other major injuries, does he make it out? Does he meet Katie? Where does the story go from here? You have a lot to work with, why not finish it? Thanks.