by fastandsloppy
Very descriptive, the story gave me a picture in my mind of the old rundown villages around the Mediterranean and of an area of seclusion that the indoctrination of the young tourist seemed real. I really enjoyed reading the whole scenario and appreciate the effort put into this fine work. Thanks .....Rich
Good story ovr all. If I had to mae any complaints abo it I would say it an interesting tae. Well written as well.
This telling is great very imaginative if not absolutely crazy I have no idea where a person would have their mind in order to come up with such a story. I give you props you are either positively raving mad or are just twisted. I don't know weather to be proud of somthing this horrible or love you for being horrible enough to wright this.