All Comments on 'Treasure Ch. 07'

Through this entire chapter, I kept waiting for something horrible and maddeningly cliche to happen to Adeon and Catherine. This chapter was more than satisfying, it was wonderful!!!!!!! Please please please don't pull a Romeo and Julliette on Catherine and Adeon!!! Everyone always thinks they're so clever when they make their characters miserable - personally, I have never found that to be the case. Not to say there shouldn't be challenges (I love the emotional depth and effective communication in this story. Many insanely trite things are avoided, characters are fleshed out, and actually up the tension a lot. Good communication can be hard, and you really showed that!!!) but please don't engineer for tears. Depression in readers isn't a meter for how good a story is.

This story is absolutely one of my favourites!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!

Omg yes!!! Let them abscond with one another !!

OMG is she PREGNANT?!??!???!!!!!!

Your story is a treasure! An absolute delight that I can't get enough of, & I eagerly await each & every update like a fiend. Lol

I'm so glad that she redeemed herself, & showed Adeon the love & care that he so deserves. I hope she realizes that he's quite a treasure himself. The way he messily ate the pie she'd made was adorable, btw. Lol

I'm also overjoyed that she finally wised up & realized all of her mistakes, as well as decided to leave with Adeon. There would've never been a question, for me. I'd have left with him back at the cave & never went home. Now, they're in a pretty precarious situation. 😕

I'm absolutely thrilled at the prospect of her being pregnant. I hope she is, but I hope nothing happens to her, the baby, or Adeon. I want them to be able to be a happy little family...& add more dragon babies to their brood. Lol

And damn those filthy, thieving snakes, for taking almost all of Adeon's priceless treasures. Then to offer it up as rewards for killing Adeon or others of his kind. I HOPE they ALL get what they've got coming to them as well as Adeon getting his treasure back! Karma's a bitch!

I thought it was precious though that Adeon cared far more about losing her than his treasure, which is usually so important to a dragon. He also saved the cloak that he kept on her, for that very reason - because she'd worn it. I hope she realizes all of this. I also hope she let's him kill her dreadful guard. Lol

They deserve a happily ever after, so my fingers are crossed!!!

P. S. : I'd love to know Adeon's background & more about his past, like where he came from/was born, who were his parents, does he have any remaining family, is he a full-blooded dragon, etc.?

Thanks for writing this wonderful story. You are very talented. 5 stars!!! 😊

Wow. Their meeting at the market made me cry. It's just so beautiful. Also, I am glad that Catherine wanted to leave the kingdom at last. I know that something might happen on the day that they'll leave, but please, make this a happy ending :( please make this a happy ending and make Catherine pregnant. I really, really love this story. I've never read a series on this site before, so this will be my first and I am really enjoying this.

Continue to series! It's amazing, I loved it. You MUST continue it!

5 star turnout! You know we have been wanting little dragon babies since chapter 2!! Awwww!!! They took adeon's gold!! I hope his idea of "saving some" is still a pretty decent amount. Still,Boooooo!! Ooohh! A dragon council!! Broker those afore-mentioned truces,perhaps meet other couples that are making it work? I get that dragons are fairly solitary,but our girl Catherine has to have a little company,apparently. Just not all her shitty townsfolk! Lol!! I am curious to know what my boy roane thinks......again love it all,can't wait to see what happens next!! -ltrl

OMG please make a happy ending! I don't want babies! They should be free to explore the world and have fun!!!! I Love Love Love all of your writings! .

Chapter eight has surpassed twenty-three pages, but it's still not quite finished. It turned out to be a lot longer than I expected. D: In a couple more days, I'll have it submitted. Keep your eyes out!

Wow, I'm quite wowed. Wow. Spychocandy in the truer sense, I am quite altered. Hopefully (sorry) her 'altered' state won't be due to little parasitical embryos planning to invade what should be a honeymoon, but rather the curious effects of a usually uncharacteristic chomp from a nasty little vermin rabbit (nudge, wink, etc.). Hmmmm... Speculation is fun. So are your story plots!

Just hope this has a happy/good ending and Adeon doesn't get hurt or die until Catherine's ready to leave.

Plus would love more of Roane, just love his character and would really appreciate if he made more of an appearance in the next chapters. And would be ecstatic if he would have his own love story and happy ending.