All Comments on 'Triad Ch. 02'

Well done...very well done!!!!!!!!

LOTS more!!!

A wonderful lovestory. So well told.

I enjoyed Ch. 01 a lot and looked forward to Ch. 02. I liked this chapter but wish you'd stretched it out a little more - still gave it 5 stars!

You've developed the characters nicely.

The best! Here, there, anywhere!!!

I hope this isn't the end. It can be a long and complex novel.

Please carry on with the mood. I loved your Princess. Started The Circle and was liking it until it incorporated too much incest for my tolerance. Had to discontinue. Hopefully this one will not follow that route.

This is beyond anything my wife reads from the grocery store book racks - a treasure of a romance. You have created a category beyond anything Literotica readers are used to reading. This old Fart can't get enough of it, and you - the person at the keyboard. The human emotion and depth of character are definitely professional quality. I'm honored to be acquainted with this script ... and you.

with an sweetly crafted build up, generous character development and a satisfied sexual evolution...Happily anticipating the next chapters.

Still, i winced when you used the word "smirk" with it's derogatory connotation.

"Smirk" Grinded" and "Thrusted" are the 3 literotica usage sins that rankle me so very badly, that i sorta wish i'd paid attention in English class 60 odd years ago, and could feel legitimately offended.

( insert self-directed "smirk" here.)

I didn't think it was possible to find actual triad fics that were worth a damn. Glad I found these.

WHOA!

So damned HOT!

Well, finally, here came the polyamorous propaganda from the mouth of Anna. It's a rare one of these stories that doesn't have that, and I appreciate those so much more. Anna had not even discussed her philosophy with Jim, as far as we know, and then just steps up and seduces his longtime friend Abby. I think that's rude. Anna has assumed the Dom role in their relationship. I don't think it would have detracted one bit from the hotness to sit down and talk about all this first, first with Jim and Abby separately, and then all together. They had not been thinking this way previously, and needed a chance to consider. To just seduce as you're talking about it is unfair, and tends to set up the Dom/sub dynamic. I have learned this the hard way, and I never trust it, or the motives of the person doing it. I don't object to the triad itself, it could potentially be good for them. I object to the way Anna went about it, which immediately compromises equality in the relationship.