All Comments on 'Trick or Treat'

Dude this should be in nonhuman not in incest.

was a nice read, but agree with the above, it's a non human story, shouldn't be in here.

nonhuman or sci-fi not here there was no incest at all totalwaste of time if you don't have enough brains to put your stories in the right catagory then don't bother posting them at all

Nonhuman, my friend. Still, it was a good story.

For Christ's sake, learn how to put together a sentence.

people who want to complain have the decency to stop hiding behind some over used word like Anonymous.

It might also interest people to know that originally this story was marked as a romance i have no idea how it ended up in incest/taboo.

Who knows, maybe the goblins are already at work...

Enjoyed it!

I enjoyed this story, and thought it to be a good Halloween tale. Stories of vampires, witches and goblins are always fun to read at this time of the year. Thanks

I love vampire stories where the vampires are civilized and this story was just that. It reminded me of an early anne rice book. Great Job :)

...it turned out they were vampires and cruelly snatched young Fancy from the world of the living. Why couldn't she just have fallen in love with the handsome hero from the house on the hill and lived happily ever after?

I thought that this was very well written. Is there a another chapter, perhaps? I want to read more. Not just for the sexual encounters of it but for the actual story of it all. Very well done.

Ignore the whiner's, wrong cat yes, but the asshole who said it was a waste of time should not have even finished reading it in the first place let alone bitch about it. And Cruely snatched from humanity, HA, yeah right. Did you read about her shitty life at all. The Vamp's were the only happy thing in her life. I loved the story. Keep writing and never let anyone tell you other wise.

What is this doing in incest/taboo? I see neither here, except for an attempted rape, which was not cool. Thumbs up to the "vampires " that turn out to be real ones though.

so what phone book can i find "dakstone57" in? NONE you are just as anonymous as we are so you have no reason to BITCH ABOUT IT. if you knew how to write it would have been put in the PROPER catagory.

I don't know why everyone is bitching about this story. Just because it is in the wrong category....pfff..

It is a great story and I enjoyed it 'til the end. I like this William immensely. It's a sweet love story. Great job

Thank you darkstone57 for sharing. This story was a treat to read. I fully enjoy enjoyed reading it. I don't read other's opinions ( if at all ) till after I have made my own. I think this story should be in the 100% super-natural candy aisle. (’-’*)♪