All Comments on 'Trick Or Tryst'

by Jenny_Jackson

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
rachlourachlouover 17 years ago
creepy!!

I read all four and this was my favourite - I found it was hard enough writing ONE, so I have no idea how you managed to write FOUR! Well done tho :)

Skip1934aSkip1934aover 17 years ago
Another well writen creepy story

Reading you makes me enjoy h'ween, even if I am long past the age I should be for such. Thanks for the great read, Jenny

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Fountain of Youth

Spilled cum on the sheets turns back the clock. Creepy as hell.

Good luck, sweets.

kbatekbateover 17 years ago
A worthy entry for the Dingus Challenge

I liked it and thought you did quite well in making it seem realistic.

sacksackover 17 years ago
all four of your Halloween stories....

(or is it five now?) are of the highest quality. I am truly blessed to have read them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Clever

but could have used an editor. There are a number of jarring errors in word choice which detracted from the overall effect of the story.

MatadoreMatadoreover 17 years ago
Lust in the Must

Just wonderful Ms. Jackson. Well written, suspenseful, interesting resolution, good sex, what more could one ask for?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous