by MSTarot
Meant to hit 5 stars, my fingers got the 4 instead. Keep up the good work
Very well written. Could have been entered as a Romance Story too. A really good one when enemity turns to love
A well-earned five from me. Not many Lit tales can tease my finger to that fifth star.
Fabulous. Makes me want to go hang about the local pool hall...
Everything was super on point, I want/need an encore so we can find out what happened in that place before, also so he can put boots to that dumb ass ex of hers. Would love to see a development of courtship...or just plain fucking lol.
And, knowing he was hustled, it STILL has the potential for another chapter...
Love your writing...
Great use of theme, psychology and sensitivity in making a great story. Exceptionally well done.