by JackKing
I've seen these stories before. Please tell me that you will continue it farther than before. The detail of the characters and there interactions is spectacular. There is no mastermind in these stories (well maybe beth) the people wind up in ever more compromising situations through their own desires accidentaly being realized.
That was amazing. Although I felt that it should've lasted longer. I'm always such a sucker for stories when someone just *snaps* and loses control out of lust. Then there's stories with women seducing younger males and younger girls seducing men, both of which turn me on unbelievably. Reading a story like yours that incorporates both of these things... my reaction went off the charts! Thanks!
Very good story. I especially liked the fact that all the action was "hidden in plain sight"!!!
this is the best story i've red on literotica in my life, and i've been readin for over 8 months, nothin was as good
Believe or not, This is the best story in the entire site. The way the plot developes and slowly builds up... My God..
Wish to read more from the author
I love a good tease. If I could wright a story I would tell a tale of my early daze. rikengine.at
I couldn't stop reading from the very first story to the last. Very good reading, loved every word. Thanks.
the best story i have ever read it was fantasik. had me going all the way thru the whole story. wish there was more chapters . would even like to see him fuck that older lady.
keep it up
Loved this story. Maybe some more adventures for the wifey?
Best story by the best author.. It would be incredibly satisfying if you could expand this story into a mini series. Adding an oral scene between them like Chpt 14 experienced by Ron.
some suggestions or creative assisted scene ideas-
Christmas party
Locker room/club gym
More Halloween party
Club pool
A great tease story. It made me wish I'd been asked.
Especially nice to have the action happen but hidden in public.
More please.
Wow, do you know how to make a hot fantasy cum to life! Incredibly hot...touches on so many powerful themes, teenaged boys lust for sexy older women, older women's desires to be wanted and lusted after, and the powerful voyeuristic pleasure of hearing about a successful seduction plan. 5*'s ++ again!
Very nice! One minor edit suggestion:
Will stepped back, managing to conceal he [HIS] already growing erections, and admired their outfit.
Great story. Detailed and fun. Jessie sounds like she resembles the women golfer Paige Spiranac. 5 stars.