All Comments on 'Tricks...and Some More Tricks'
by DanielWilson
- 26 Comments
Chuckles1966over 5 years agoDeleting and reposting? What's up with that?
Anonymousover 5 years agoCould we please get some way to enforce the category that a story is placed in!!!!!!
Anonymousover 5 years agoI figured you’d move it to noncon. But nope you went for the repost.
So tell me, since this story contains neither good nor bad wives (at least on their own account), but is instead filled with psychotic neighbors, the occult, abduction, drugging, rape, bondge, torture, and an old lady who wants to force an older man to fuck her underage daughter and her friends, (admittedly this version doesn’t denote the ages of the children like the last version did)...
Why would you repost this in LW?
26thNCover 5 years agoHappy Cuckoween. You ain't winning the contest either. Hope the Great Pumpkin gets you.
Harddaysknightover 5 years agothis category. Even well done stories will not score well enough to beat mediocre stories in other categories. (I am not suggesting this was well done.) It's just the way it is. Some things will never change.
Anonymousover 5 years agoYou never know, the husband could have great fun with other women in this arrangement.
Anonymousover 5 years agoIt didn't feel like you made any changes. You certainly posted it in the wrong category. And I always have to laugh when some stupid man is sticking his dick into an unwilling persons mouth. What did the warlock do when the wife bit his cock off? Burst into flames? You do know she had teeth - right? This was just awful.
1 star
ArsVampyreover 5 years agoIt's not interesting to read, well done, or of any value to anyone else.
Anonymousover 5 years agoShould have never survived the Salem Witch Trials and gone on to infect the authors mind.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis story could have been so much better if it had been true to the title ... Tricks
If you had thought a little more about how both the husband and wife were tricked into taking the Sybian test, rather than being abducted and raped.
Maybe a bet with the sexy woman next door, then during the test the reward and penitys could have been ramped up, both the husband and wife could have been edged, offered a out with a minor forfet or continue for a greater prize.
Eventually subcumming to their fate and giving you the a great start to a bdsm / cuckold series
The erotic result would have been better without the need for rape
Anonymousover 5 years agoFits right in with the rest of the garbage posted today. Only one story worth reading, and this is not one of them.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI liked it! It was just a short jerk off story. No real details about the people, just a scene. Good job! Unfortunately, the loving wives section can be a brutal section. It’s extremely hard to please most and impossible to please everyone. That said, perhaps you could put a disclaimer in the beginning so at least people are forewarned.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to part 2!
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis was easily the best in the contest. The action was erotic and everything was well described and not rushed. It's a crime that people are giving it one star without having actually read it.
oldbearswitchover 5 years agoHot stroker if you overlook the dungeon s/dragons crap, doesn't really fit in LW
Belongs in rape/fetish/sci fi.
One star as submitted to LW.
Nothing wrong with D/s fantasy or maybe, maybe, even cuck role play!!! But as an integral part of an actual marriage? Cue the tape of " Cuck Crap..."
Anonymousabout 2 years agoBullets are the only response to such actions. If hubby gets loose the crowd should suffer
