by TheDarkCloud
This is so Story of O. You take a woman who already hates herself and thinks all she's worth is making men enjoy it when she opens her mouth, add a man who hates women, and then completely run her into the ground. If you hate anyone this much, you need to seek serious help. Mostly you seem to have a major problem with misogyny. Please get help!
The negative comments are from some immature folks who for some reason insist on being the moral police for everyone at Literotica. It seems that in their case neither head has any brains in it. Nice story keep up the good work.
Thanks to everyone who read my story and sent feedbac it was much appreciated.
A bit of back story, the Trish in the story is based on former WWE Diva Trish Status who I would have loved in this situation!
Some feedback
OMG WOW what a truely amazing fanasty! If if if only.....
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suzanne
Your'e just phenomenal. The humiliations, your description of Monica and fat Tony. Then you topped it off with another newsagent scene. Drove me crazy! The chinese guy made her repeat the obscene titles. I have been there. Bought porn from a pushy, little chinese newsagent. Delighted in taunting me in front of his grinning assistant. Made me feel powerless, tall, akward and submissive to them. Your superior writing brings the old feelings. You are the best!
This story is the best I ever read!!!!!
well done,damn good
Thanks for sending me the new story about Trish. I only got part way through it before cumming!!!! I'll have to finish it later. Whew!
I thoroughly enjoyed the story, it flowed fairly well and had obviously been spell checked and grammar checked so that the basics did not interfere with the reading.
This story is consensual and reluctant but non violent which appeals to me.
Trish has been in left in a wonderful predicament but I think that you have left one or two threads unfollowed.
I would like to see a part two to this story; the janitor is around somewhere and he should turn up and "rescue" Trish so that she can be humiliated every day at school. The janitor will naturally be old and grubby and disreputable, also there is still the parents evening to explore.
Whether you continue the story or not I appreciate the effort that you have put into it. Great
This is one of the best stories I have ever read!! Please please please continue it. I want to know what happens to Trish after she gets discovered and obviously goes in search of another master to humiliate her. I know it sounds bad but I am just like Trish. I absolutely LOVE to be humiliated sexually in public by my hubby and his friends. But thank god they have never made me shave my head!!All I can say is THANK YOU so much for this story!!!
Luv you...your little fuckslut, cumslut, alleyslut, dogslut and urinal slut, Candy....xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo...
candykr@hotmail.com
I came twice reading this one and got to say she shares my fantasys. Only difference would have been I wished I was used in the toilets. Hot cum filling my pussy mmmmmmm. More like this please x
I loved this story, always looking forward to what Trish would be made to do next. And the way he just left her in the classroom at the end was just priceless.
well paced, creative and the best bsdm ending ever. thanks :)
Apart from the monica bit the rest was 200000% HOT would have been good to hear the reactions of others when they walked in and also the father who bj'd her in the loos
The title about says it all. O'll just add I did not want to take my hand from my cock to scroll.
Love to obey such a powerful master like him. He could make my dream as being a stupid fuck meat/ a dumb whore cunt for a powerful man become true X The idea of waiting to get mouth fucked in a male toilet is brilliant! It d be a great idea of training myself to be a cum slut for some lucky guys, if i lucky enough I might get to be a good sex slave for someone who want to use me again :)
Nothing redeeming about this. Ending very sadistic and cruel!!!