All Comments on 'Trivial Pursuits Ch. 05'

Just loving this story and I sit here watching for each installed, ,, it has me intrigued!

I've been checking for updates these past few days and as always, another brilliant chapter from you!

Not to be "picky"' but if it takes as long to get laid as it's taking to get to "first base", the good parts won't arrive until mid-May. 😂😁😱

Eloquent writing that flows like a river but boy, am I falling asleep......chapter 5 already and no clue as to what Alessa is about?

I absolutely love these characters. Even though Alessa is still shrouded in mystery your writing gives such depth to both of them leaving me wanting more. It's like a little mini series.

Love the slow speed of the physicality, makes it better imo.

Smart writing overall, great work!

Wonderful characters and beautifully written.

Thank you so much 😊

Very much enjoy your writing style and pace of this story. Pay no heed to those looking for a quick read. Your effort is a Cadillac not a go-cart. Horseman6:8