All Comments on 'Trivial Pursuits Ch. 06'

Cliffhangers :(

I hate you ><

I'm really caught up in this story. Don't leave me hanging!

Spell check, I presume. Too funny.

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Thank you for this series, one of the very best so far

I love it! I think the 'slow' pace is perfect.... Makes it that much hotter now that things are starting to happen! Keep up the great work!

This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. Perfect pace and great character development. Keep up the great work!

The pacing is torturous but totally perfect for the story! I agree with the comment below - this is one of the best pieces on the site right now. My only request is that your Author Notes be placed at the end of each chapter; they have spoliers in them and I like to go into each chapter with an open mind. Thanks for posting regularly, and for all of your hard work!!

I think this is great but not nice to leave us hanging like that! I've given every other chapter 5 stars but I'll just leave this one unrated, to not skew the rating. Please continue right away. Also, this is romance, so please keep it in the realm of persuasion, not non-consent.

The build-up is awesome as is your style. But these 2-page chapters are becoming too tantalizing and too much of a tease. Seriously considering not returning to Literotica till (I hope) there's a corpus of chapters to go through!!

Rants aside, great writing, as usual! Please keep it up.

This just keeps getting better and better. Yet another wonderful chapter but you're incredibly cruel leaving it there!! My head is in permanent freeze frame until the next chapter. Hurry up please!

Nice story, but I am hoping that, in the oysters scene, the condiment suggested was meant to be "tabasco", not "tobacco"...lol

He gave her severe psycological trauma....and now she is cuddling with him??? Shit I would have her freaking out when she saw the drawing ( that is some deep freaky shit) then she learns that he is the wierdo that harrased her in the ally.....now she is kissing him.... I keep following you to see where are you going. I have faith.

I really love the story, but am annoyed that I came to the end only for it to be continued. I always check the end of stories first to make sure this doesn't happen, but I guess I forget, so now I have to pay the price. I'm sure Dickens' readers felt the same angst as I do waiting for the next episode in the papers of what we know today as his novels.

Small details can pull you into a story or throw you out of one.

Few typos but nobobys perfect waiting rest of the story......

Your stories are so good at building up, then keeping us in suspense.

Thanks.

I agree completely!

I've never heard of anyone putting tobacco on oysters. Perhaps you meant Tabasco sauce?