All Comments on 'Trivial Pursuits Ch. 07'

you are an absolute pleasure to read

Now this chapter was an absolute joy to read. Max has added a whole new dimension to the story. And me, I wonder where your devilish mind is going to take us!! 😛

Love the introspection that Denny is going through. Great chapter as always! I meant to give you a five but somehow pushes a four. Where is the undo button when you need one :-)

Then what happens?

Well done you sure know how to weave a riveting tale!

Id suggest putting the story under non-erotic

Good! A logical pause and not a dumb cliffhanger like Ch. 6. And I like Max as a confidant. For Ch. 6 I had commented that I didn't like the ending and i wouldn't give you a rating. But with this you have earned back your 5 stars for Ch. 7.

it's good. Very good. Anxious to read more. Good character development, clever plot so far. Thanks for sharing.

amazing! the terrific thing is that this is what life as humans is all about. Great writing!

That was pretty deep. One of the best chapters I have ever read in Literotica. You set a very high bar!!! I would even forget to breathe during the reading. 5* is not enough. I have been too generous with 5* awards!!

My first time commenting on the series so far. This was such a layered chapter and gloriously explored. Cant wait to continue reading as the evolution of the characters continues. Thanks titania!