All Comments on 'Truck Ride Ch. 01'

Pathetic attempt by the author. Ridiculous to the extreme. I am sure his imagination is running wild while penning this stuff.

Al the least, i do appreciate your attempt to write a story.

turned me on :) waiting for next part...

Let's see what happens in the subsequent parts!

Such a prmoising start just ruined away! What's new about drugging a woman and raping her?? Erotica is not about sex. It is about the story leading to sex.

It is not a story one would expect from you...after having read your 'Fifty Rupee Whore' etc. Disappointed really because it is not at all convincing. No such drug is on market yet which will turn on a person like this.

this is the first part, but you havnt written other parts.. please do write

Will you be writing more, heh?

I agree with the negative comments, whether polite or downright dismissive. This is a very mediocre story and I did write it very early on. It seems very contrived and illogical. :)

I see the author has also said it's a mediocre story but I still think it's not as bad as all the comments made it out to be. There is a germ of eroticism in it, even if not fully developed, in the situation of a city-bred lady being taken by two uncouth truck drivers. Hope urbanslut decides to continue it.

We would love to read chapter 2. urban slut come on please complete truck adventures

Enjoyable but copied...nice try though..maybe some original work would be more appreciated..?

Nooo, need more!!

Awaiting the next part.............

Where are the reinforcements??