All Comments on 'Trust and Obey'

by JukeboxEMCSA

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ErosRising69ErosRising69over 8 years ago
Delicious

Wonderfully clever play on Dr. Seuss, complete with twisted thing one and thing two. Wish I could give it 6 stars.

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 8 years ago
Tantalizing!

Gigi's mind control certainly worked on Louise and although not normally interested in girl-on-girl action, I find myself seriously considering the possibility. Could you put me "in touch" with Trust and Obey? I just might switch sides. ;-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Brilliant!

Best thing I've read on Literotica! Totally hot and totally funny all at once.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Weird.....ly.....nope, just weird....

....and almost sexually dystopian.

God, I hated Dr. Seus!!!

GigglingGoblinGigglingGoblinabout 8 years ago
Very Nice Job

This story surprised me

And caught me off-guard

And did all those things that to do are so hard

This is a new favorite

Well done! Hurrah!

Tonight a right way to write writings I saw.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I love this little story!

I love this little story, it fills me with glee! I wish I had someone to share it with me.

Your words are amazing, the stories perfect. Your tales are a brilliant, well written objects!

Keep spinning tales of losing one's mind, oh Jukebox, my leader.

Because you've just gotten yourself a new reader!

VyresOfTheArtVyresOfTheArtabout 8 years ago

This is a great little story, so lewd and erotic! :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Where did this come from?

I've read many of your stories and this one caught me off guard; I didn't know what to expect but I couldn't stop reading. I fully enjoyed the rhyming and the detail! Great job, keep writting, I really look foward to it!

P.S. I guess I'll never read Seuss the same way again 😉

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yup.

This one had me both giggling and Incredibly aroused.

UsuallyPresentUsuallyPresentabout 4 years ago
Hilarious AND hot!

Clever words on the screen bid me laugh so clean, I barely even felt the orgasm-lash’s welt! Ted Geisel’d blush whilst feeling a rush to read your tale so lurid and hale. So I’ll merely state I cannot hate Gigi and friends’ friendly but sinister ends.

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