by Master_Vassago
Some of the wording was not quite realistic to me, but it worked beautifully with your story. Also, I liked how you didn't make Dave suddenly know all about how to be a Dom, and that you included that little line about how he was going to learn everything he could. Those little details added a lot to your story. :)
he seems to have forgiven the cheating slut. In reality this makes him a cuckold and possibly a wimp. She will porably leave him for a more forcefull master.
Really enjoyed the beginning of this... think however the moment he forgives her so easily it becomes hubby and wifey playing a game ... take her into real slavery as his slut would be my suggestion
The husband and wife are truly in love with each other, but it is clear that he will have to become more informed of this new lifestyle, before he can guarantee that she will his and his alone. She should be punished for her infidelity a little more strenuously than just a spanking though.
MV, This is a very wonderful story. I can't wait to read more!
Great story, really enjoyed it and want to read of their further explorations. The only fault is that it could have used a little more proof-reading (but minor).
The new born slut-slave wife needs more punishment for her lying to her husband.
None of my Masters would have ever let me off with such a light (and enjoyable) spanking. i look forward to Him becoming more informed-- she was really topping from the bottom. This series has great possibilities !
It doesn't have to be a hardcore master/slave situation to be mutually enjoyable for the parties. Some people are in tune to sexuality and can easily forgive a transgression when it happened out of embarrassment to ask for what they really want. Husbands and Wives will always be more compassionate to the other. It's natural and wonderful.
I loved it....its a shame she had to cheat in order to get what she needed....but I still loved the story.