by princessmaryann
and very well written. I even like the ending, which I seldom do.
You know, the juice of the sexual story is the tension be it the supprise, shock or delay then as it grows for the characters it grows for the readers as well, you chose such a hell of a sexy topic and the players to die for but took out the element of excitement, the sister should not have laid it bare that they would end-up fucking, what's the point of the truth n dare game then?
I think she should invite one of her friends to play the game in part 2.
The truth or dare element was completely superfluous, they had already progressed far enough that there was no tension left, making the title feel misleading.
If the author wanted the game they should have played it before anything sexual had happened, and before they had decided to fuck.
It would also have worked better if they had been less quick to fully accept the incestuous acts.
It's true that the truth or dare would have worked better if it was introduced earlier in the story, but this was still pretty well written. 4 stars from me.
Reading a story that is at least plausible is way more fun than those that tend toward the ridiculous. Also one of the things I like in stories I read is the romance factor. Your story hit the mark.
Anal no thanks I'm not gay. Shaved pussy? But it looks so cute just like a three year old! I like a well trimmed woman pussy, not the little kiddy look. Love your stories, especially A Baby for Tina, one of my all time favorites.
wanted to do 2 guys sometime and the boring rectal exam, it brought it down a notch.
Great story... and how exactly does a guy fucking a girls butt make him gay ?!!
Great story! Very enjoyable read. Im also curious how enjoying anal with a woman translates into gay?
Moving on good story!